Tuesday, May 20, 2008

Piece # 11 Haiku

a lunchroom
full of life
forever

packed school
testing week
tension

young boy
fighting to
get through

1 comment:

Mr. Popken said...

Your third one really works for all the wrong reasons (that's meant as a compliment). Despite its lack of specificity and detail, and it's rather vague language, it's a very moving (and universal) image.